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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the production of milk annually in four countries in
during
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20
years
 ago .
Overall
 it is evident that the
Netherlands
 increased marked
duing
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during
 3
years
 .
While
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 Guatemala the average
less
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decreased
enormous
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for
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 three
years
 .
Firstly
 in
the
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2010 it
was
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rose
rapid
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 in average the production of milk annually in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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.
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 on
other
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hands
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 Australia and
Netherlands
 Want up
considerable
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 in 1990
effective
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increased
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increasing
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average
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the average
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prouduct
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product
 annually.
Whereas
 the two
cantury
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century
 Tanzania and Guatemala declined
sharp
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 to average in first
years
 .
on the other hand
 in
the
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2000 the contrast results in
first
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years
 in Australia and
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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prouduct annually
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respectively
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.the 2000 fall sudden in
prouduct
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product
 in Guatemala.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, netherlands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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