The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The given table shows the number of
children
ever born to women aged 40 to 44 years old in Australia . The information was gathered since
1981 .
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in
Overall
, 2006 had the highest number of none
Correct quantifier usage
no
children
born among the past years .
Starting with 1981, a variety of high and low percentages of the
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apply
children
born
. Add a missing verb
were born
In
instance, the percentage of one child was 7.6 , and the percentage of two Change preposition
For
children
born was 29.0 . Furthermore
, in 1986 and 1981 there was
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were
a
close similarity percentages in the three Correct article usage
apply
children
born , which is that in 1981 the number percent
was 27.4 , Change the spelling
per cent
while
in 1986 it was lower than
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apply
it
by only 0.4 %.
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apply
Moreover
, 1996 and 2006 had near percentages in most of the table numbers of children
. However
, 2006 had the higher average of children
born in the majority of the numbers of children
born .Submitted by fiesaidi on
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