The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart illustrates the prediction of Jean's seals for two
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next year in Turkey ,
while
the pie graph displays the stake of projected business happening by the end of next year for the same group.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Jack and
Jones
will be selling triple the number of
mango
pairs of Jeans profit-making by January. In July, both
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will have nearly the same number of profits. A notable estimation is that 50% of the market share will be for other
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. It can be seen in the bar graph that Jack and
Jones
will excel in
Mango
financial , reaching around 450 thousand economic for pairs of Jeans , where mangoes will be selling close to 100 thousand . By February both company's wholesale will decline and start to gradually increase. In July,
mango
sales will rocket and reach 500 , July is the only month where
Mango
monetary will top Jack and
Jones
. Moving to the pie graph , other businesses will be taking 50% of the market share , leaving the other half for
Mango
and Jack and
Jones
.
Mango
will take on only 20% of the share
whereas
Jack and
Jones
will take on the rest which is 30% .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jones, mango with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
  • marketing campaigns
  • economic conditions
  • fashion trends
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