The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided process below illustrates how a cup of
coffee
is produced.
Overall
,there are eleven steps for making
coffee
,starting from picking the
coffee
beans
by
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workers from trees and finishing with packing
coffee
into the jars. First of all,the
coffee
beans
are picked by women farmers from tall trees.The second step is that the
coffee
beans
are spread on the
ground
and dried under the sunlight by men workers.Once the
coffee
beans
have been dried on the
ground
,they are
then
roasted by a special machine.
Following
this
,workers cool the roasted
beans
quickly in order to grind them
by
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a grinder appliance which
work
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by rotating
it's
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handle.
The following step is
that the
ground
beans
are mixed with hot water and
then
they are strained from
mixture
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the mixture
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.(The hot water and
beans
are separated completely).Afterwards,the separated
beans
are frozen in the freezing device so as to be
ground
again with
machine
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.After that,the
ground
frozen liquid
are
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dried in the vacuum and water is removed from the mixture.
Finally
,the prepared
coffee
are
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packed into
the
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several various jars so that they can be sold in the store.
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