The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided process below illustrates how a cup of

coffee

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is produced.

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,there are eleven steps for making

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,starting from picking the

coffee

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beans

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workers from trees and finishing with packing

coffee

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into the jars. First of all,the

coffee

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beans

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are picked by women farmers from tall trees.The second step is that the

coffee

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beans

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are spread on the

ground

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and dried under the sunlight by men workers.Once the

coffee

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beans

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have been dried on the

ground

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,they are

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roasted by a special machine.

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this

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,workers cool the roasted

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quickly in order to grind them

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a grinder appliance which

work

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by rotating

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handle.

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that the

ground

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beans

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are mixed with hot water and

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they are strained from

mixture

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the mixture

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.(The hot water and

beans

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are separated completely).Afterwards,the separated

beans

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are frozen in the freezing device so as to be

ground

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again with

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the machine

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.After that,the

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frozen liquid

are

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dried in the vacuum and water is removed from the mixture.

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,the prepared

coffee

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are

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packed into

the

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apply

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several various jars so that they can be sold in the store.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, beans, ground with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?