The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided process below illustrates how a cup of
coffee
is produced.
Overall
,there are eleven steps for making coffee
,starting from picking the coffee
beans
by
workers from trees and finishing with packing Change preposition
apply
coffee
into the jars.
First of all,the coffee
beans
are picked by women farmers from tall trees.The second step is that the coffee
beans
are spread on the ground
and dried under the sunlight by men workers.Once the coffee
beans
have been dried on the ground
,they are then
roasted by a special machine.Following
this
,workers cool the roasted beans
quickly in order to grind them by
a grinder appliance which Change preposition
with
work
by rotating Change the verb form
works
it's
handle.
Replace the word
its
The following step is
that the ground
beans
are mixed with hot water and then
they are strained from mixture
.(The hot water and Add an article
the mixture
a mixture
beans
are separated completely).Afterwards,the separated beans
are frozen in the freezing device so as to be ground
again with machine
.After that,the Correct article usage
the machine
ground
frozen liquid are
dried in the vacuum and water is removed from the mixture.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Finally
,the prepared coffee
are
packed into Change the verb form
is
the
several various jars so that they can be sold in the store.Correct article usage
apply
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