The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps compare the condition of an industrial
area
in Norbiton between the current situation and the proposed plan. Overall
, the significant change for future development in this
town is the alteration from an industrial area
to a residential area
.
Currently, there are eight factories surrounding the main road
, situated next to the river in the south and placed on the east side of the town. This
town also
has farmland which is located in the north of the river. However
, in the planned development, there will be built seven areas for housing, one area
placed north of the river, next to farmland, and others will be placed surrounding the main road
.
In the future plan, in addition
to the development of residential areas, several public facilities will also
operate in this
area
. Shops and a medical centre will be built next to the main road
. In addition
, a playground for children will be built in the centre of residential areas. The school building will be built north of the main road
, next to the main residential area
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