The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The maps illustrate changes that occurred in the manufacturing region of Norbiton city and the most noticeable changes are the replacement of factories with new residents and the extension of roads between the road and river.
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, there were several major changes near the roundabout, as most of the factories were demolished and new buildings were projected. Between the river and the main road, dealing with the growth of population new recreation areas have been developed
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as playgrounds, shops and medical
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. In the east of the town, considering the children
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new school was constructed. In order to improve transportation, new roads were
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was extended to the North of the industrial zone and to facilitate access to the farmland new bridge constructed over the river. From the roundabout to the east side the road
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was lined, in order to provide the transport of the children to the new school. In the south of the area, a small roundabout
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was designed in order to ease the traffic congestion. (Samir Nabiyev)
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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