You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide nearly 5
emissions
per person in four nations ( UK
, Sweden, Italy, Portugal) which were produced over 40 years from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the CO2 emissions
in UK
and Sweden went down, Correct article usage
the UK
while
in Italy and Portugal, they went up. Moreover
, UK
had the highest CO2 Correct article usage
the UK
emissions
over the given period.
With regards to the amount of of
CO2 Remove the redundancy
apply
emissions
in the UK
, it began at around 11 metric tonnes
and then
it
dropped to 9 metric Correct pronoun usage
apply
tonnes
in 2007. Similary
, in Sweden, the figure started at 9 metric Correct your spelling
Similarly
tonnes
after which it peaked at 11 metric tonnes
before falling rapidlyChange preposition
to
tonnes
in the final year.
On the other hand
, CO2 emissions
in Italy started to rose
, originally there were about 4 metric Wrong verb form
rise
tonnes
which reached just below 7 metric tonnes
in 2007. Also
Portugal speedily hit the peak from roughly 1 to 5 metric Add a comma
Also,
tonnes
in final
years.Correct pronoun usage
its final
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, uk, co, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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