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The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
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The bar chart demonstrates the number of
hours
 spent by young adults in Chester on various activities between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that every year, teenagers spend the most time watching television and the least time playing bowling. The amount of time spent watching television increased steadily from 2002 to 2007. In 2002 and 2003, 25
hours
 every week were spent watching television. By 2004,
this
 figure had increased by 5
hours
. The number of
hours
 rose to around 35 and 37 in 2005 and 2006, respectively.
Lastly
, there was a marginal increase in the following year to around 38
hours
, making it the highest figure on the chart. For bowling, the total
hours
 dedicated fluctuated between 2002 and 2007, but every year it was less than 5
hours
. In 2002, the number of
hours
 stood at around 4.5 weekly, but
then
 there was a downward trend until 2004. There was a slight rise in 2005, but from
then
 on, the trend was generally decreasing.
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