The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012 Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts the fluctuations that happened in three various sectors of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
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