The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The provided maps illustrate the changes to an
island
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before and after the construction of tourist facilities.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the transformation emphasizes a shift from a pristine environment to a developed tourist hub.
First,
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the
island
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was largely undeveloped with a beach on the western side and a few palm trees scattered across the landscape. It is obvious that there are no structures or pathways, indicating a natural and untouched environment. The second map reveals significant development. The most notable additions are the construction of a reception area near the southern part of the
island
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and a restaurant towards the northwest.
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, multiple accommodation units
spread
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across the central area.
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, a pier has been built on the southern coast, likely for docking boats.
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, to facilitate movement, footpaths and vehicle tracks have been introduced. It is apparent that footpaths connect all the accommodations to the restaurant and the reception,
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vehicle tracks provide access to key areas. Despite these changes, the swimming pool remains in the same location but is now easily accessible from the new facilities by footpath. In conclusion, the introduction of these developments has transformed the
island
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from a natural state to a structured tourist destination with significant infrastructure to support visitors.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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