The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. TEST 1
The chart provides information concerning the beverage purchasing habits of Australian people from five different towns in the
last
4 weeks. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the number of people who went to a cafe' for
coffee
and tea ranked first throughout the given data,
whereas
that for buying fresh
coffee
stood
last
. Starting with the habits of citizens in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart, It was shown that figures for
coffee
and tea are the highest segments of the chart by more than 55%.
However
, the number of instant and fresh
coffee
was decreased on order in between around 35% and 55%. Moving onto
coffee
lovers in Adelaide, it looks a lot different from other cities
that
Change preposition
in that
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the figure for instant
coffee
stayed at the top exactly 50%.
While
the number of individuals who went to cafes' and fresh
coffee
almost reached 40% and 35% respectively.
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