The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict how an
island
changes before and after it is built for tourist facilities. As can be seen, the most noticeable change is the middle land which is surrounded by palm trees. First above, the
island
has a land size of 100 meters, there are 12 palm trees and one beach. After that, it occurs to change with the development of some tourism facilities.
Likewise
, the restaurant is to the north, and the reception is next to the restaurant. There are 15 new traditional
houses
constructed, where 6
houses
in the east and 9
houses
in the west of the
island
.
In addition
, 3
houses
have a function for accommodation in the western.
Subsequently
, there are 2 ships that are operational on the
island
. At the same time, the beach is transformed into a swimming area. That just not that, the islands have added footpaths and vehicle tracks alongside the traditional
houses
, and
also
new bridge looks like alphabet “T”.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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