The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
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The bar chart illustrates the
coffee
and tea
buying proportion and drinking habits of residents in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart in the last
4 weeks
.
Overall
, Most percentage of people
in all the cities
went to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
in the last
4 weeks
except in Adelaide
. Least
percentage of residents bought fresh Correct word choice
The lowest
coffee
.
For the past 4 weeks
, fresh coffee
sales were less than 50% in all the cities
, the highest in Sydney being just below 45% and the least in both Brisbane
and Adelaide
, slightly below 35%. In Hobart people
who bought instant coffee
marks just below 55% which is the highest in that category. Brisbane
placed second highest being just above 50% . Most people
in Adelaide
which is 50% bought instant coffee
.
More than 60% in Melbourne went to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
and it is the highest percentage in all five cities
for the last
4 weeks
. 55% of people
in Brisbane
prefer going to a cafe
for coffee
or tea
. Apart from Adelaide
, residents in all other four cities
preferred going to a cafe
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