Some people think that using animal for experimental purpose is cruel but other people think it is necessary for development of science Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some argue that animal usage for
experiemental
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experimental
need
is cruel Fix the agreement mistake
needs
while
others believe it is essential for development
of science. Add an article
the development
This
essay will elaborate both
sides and I will Change preposition
on both
also
give my opinion.
On the one hand, it is not in order to kill or injure an animal with an
aim of wanting to discover something new. Correct article usage
the
This
is because despite
the fact that they are animals, whether wild or domesticated, they Add the comma(s)
, despite
also
have the right to be protected from any harm as well as
right
to live. Correct article usage
the right
For instance
, in the last
two years, Saibiria has introduced a law that restrict
killing an animal for Change the verb form
restricts
experiemental
Correct your spelling
experimental
purpose
. The experts are advised to search for alternative methods so as to govern the animal species.
Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
On the other hand
, scientistS
are supposed to advance their knowledge and Correct your spelling
scientists
this
can not happen without practical lessons. For example
, majority
of the medication that Correct article usage
the majority
are
used currently by human Change the verb form
is
being
were first used in animals to observe for any adverse reaction. If Fix the agreement mistake
beings
this
did not happen it means we would still be using traditional methods for curatives
purposes which were not efficient 100 per cent. Correct your spelling
curative
Also
, before new
vaccine is given to people, its safety is seen on the animal sample Add an article
the new
a new
that is
used for pretest
.
In conclusion, Add an article
the pretest
although
it might be seen as a cruel thing to use animals for experiement
, I strongly support the idea because it has a significant impact Correct your spelling
experiment
experiments
of
discovering new products into existence and Change preposition
on
also
ensures safety
of the Add an article
the safety
commondities
used globally.Correct your spelling
communities
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task achievement
Try to fully develop your main points with more detailed explanations and additional examples where relevant. This will help in providing a more comprehensive response.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the logical structure of your paragraphs. Make sure each paragraph has a clear central idea and transitions smoothly to the next.
coherence cohesion
Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary and aim to use more complex sentence structures, as this can enhance the depth and sophistication of your ideas.
task achievement
Check for spelling and grammatical errors to improve the accuracy of your language usage. For example, 'experiment' instead of 'experiement' and 'Siberia' instead of 'Saibiria'.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, providing a structured framework for your argument.
task achievement
You address both perspectives on the topic, providing a balanced discussion.
task achievement
You offer relevant examples, such as the law in Siberia and the use of animals in medical testing, to support your points.