Some Countries have implemented mandatory community programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages for this for young people?
Nowadays, some countries implemented
a imperative community programs
for young Correct the article-noun agreement
imperative community programs
an imperative community program
people
. Where they perform various types of charitable work
but does this
have good effects or does it not?
Without Correct article usage
a doubt
doubt
there Add a comma
doubt,
has
to be some advantages to enforcing Change the verb form
have
this
programAdd the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
children who have to take part in this
are aged 16 to 18 so they are just learning about themselves and creating their personality so by helping old people
or working with animals they will gain good morals and will learn to help people
in need . And by doing that we are planting good seeds for the coming generation . Morover
, the participants will provide a helping hand to those who Correct your spelling
Moreover
work
in the place they are assisting for example
once me and my sister helped the nurses in the geriatric homes they were thankfull
that they had less Correct your spelling
thankful
work
than usual .
On the other hand
, many disadvantages will also
come with the enforcement of this
program . Because if charity is forced upon us it will not come out of us purely so some will not give their all . In
addition
it will kind of be a burden for some as it may align with the school year where kids will be busy so it will only add to the Add a comma
addition,
work
they already have .
To sum
up
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up,
i
think the idea is good and has Change the capitalization
I
potential
to serve the community greatly Correct article usage
the potential
however
there is a problem with the enforcment
part of Correct your spelling
enforcement
this
idea . So to gain from this
programm
it needs to be advertised greatlyCorrect your spelling
programme
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
they can say although
it is mandatory there will be prizes to
the Change preposition
for
people
who participate with passion and those who do it out of the kindness of their hearts .Submitted by aljouri50x50 on
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