Some peopl think there should be free healy care for all people, but others disagree. Discuss both side and Give your opinion.
A highly controversial issue today
relate
Correct subject-verb agreement
relates
health
care, some Change preposition
to health
individuals
think that Use synonyms
people
are Use synonyms
taken
free Wrong verb form
taking
healthcare
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
Other
are totally opposite from the notion. In Fix the agreement mistake
Others
this
essay, I am going to examine Linking Words
this
question from both Linking Words
ponts
of view, and Correct your spelling
points
then
give my own opinion on the matter.
On one side of Linking Words
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the argument
argument
there are Add a comma
argument,
people
who argue that Use synonyms
healthcare
should be free for everyone. The main reason for believing Use synonyms
this
is that everyone can get Linking Words
treatment
whether they are rich or poor. Most Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
the
rich Correct article usage
apply
individuals
are saved their lives by getting expensive treatments but Use synonyms
this
is impossible for poor or Linking Words
middle class
ones. A particularly good example here isAdd a hyphen
middle-class
, Cancer
is a fatal disease. Hina Correct your spelling
that cancer
khan
is a famous Capitalize word
Khan
indian
tv actress. She cures herself by getting chemotherapy. Change the capitalization
Indian
However
, persons below the Linking Words
pyline
cannot afford Correct your spelling
byline
such
Linking Words
a
expensive Change the article
an
treatment
. Use synonyms
As a result
, free Linking Words
healthcare
Use synonyms
help
Change the verb form
helps
individuals
to get Use synonyms
treatment
for fatal diseases Use synonyms
such
as HIV, cancer Linking Words
etcetra
.
Correct your spelling
etcetera
On the other hand
, it is Linking Words
also
possible to make Linking Words
opposing
case. It is Correct article usage
an opposing
ofen
argued that if Correct your spelling
often
the
Correct article usage
apply
healthcare
Use synonyms
free
for everyone, no one can make money neither the government nor Add a missing verb
is free
healthcare
professionals. Use synonyms
As
Correct word choice
Healthcare
healthcare
Use synonyms
professional
always have Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
higher
Correct article usage
a higher
chane
Correct your spelling
chance
chances
to get
infections or Change preposition
of getting
disease
very easily. So, Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
people
have to work Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
such
Linking Words
atmosphere
should be rewarding. They should get some money for putting their lives in danger to cure others. Top on Correct article usage
an atmosphere
that
, it is difficult for Change preposition
of that
government
too. It is not possible to make fully free Add an article
the government
healthcare
for Use synonyms
individuals
. There are many other issues in Use synonyms
country
to look after Add an article
the country
such
as Linking Words
terorism
, education Correct your spelling
terrorism
etcetra
.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits, on balance, Correct your spelling
etcetera
however
, I feel that Linking Words
healthcare
ought to Use synonyms
be cost
less for Change to the active voice
cost
have cost
masses
since poor Correct article usage
the masses
people
get Use synonyms
treatment
Use synonyms
same
as rich Correct article usage
the same
individuals
. Saving lives has ground moral value. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it Linking Words
is
Verb problem
has
also
diminished the difference between Linking Words
poor
and Correct article usage
the poor
rich
.Correct article usage
the rich
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task achievement
Improve spelling and grammatical accuracy. Some common words have been misspelled such as 'health care,' 'people,' 'Hina Khan,' 'pylines,' 'often,' 'chance,' 'infection,' 'terrorism,' 'etcetera,' and others. Proper use of capitalization and punctuation will also be beneficial.
coherence cohesion
Make sure that both points of view are balanced in their word count and detail. The latter part of your essay summarizes the pros and cons, but it could delve into the opposing viewpoint more deeply.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that supporting points logically follow from it. Your paragraphs sometimes mix multiple ideas which can confuse the reader.
task achievement
You present both sides of the argument clearly and provide relevant examples to support your points. This adds depth to your essay.
coherence cohesion
The essay covers the topic effectively, presenting arguments for both sides and giving an opinion. It demonstrates an understanding of the issue and provides some good points.