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I. The pie charts below illustrate the most popular sports in French secondary schools in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

I. The pie charts below illustrate the most popular sports in French secondary schools in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts demonstrate the most popular sports in French secondary schools in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall
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, the
popularity
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 of sports fluctuates within the main four kinds: tennis, swimming,
basketball
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, and
football
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. Among these, the most popular
sport
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 is always swimming,
while
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 the second most popular changed between
football
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 and
basketball
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 during
this
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 period, leaving tennis the fourth most popular
sport
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. The most popular
sport
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, swimming, only fluctuated from approximately 40% to just under 50% in
popularity
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, peaking in 2000 with a percentage of 48.
On the other hand
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, as for the second most popular
sport
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,
basketball
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 was as popular as
football
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 in 1990 with a percentage of 16, and its
popularity
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 decreased by around 10% in 2000,
while
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 the
popularity
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 of
football
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 remained almost unchanged. Contrary to what happened in 2000, in 2010,
basketball
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 increased its
popularity
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instead
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, occupying up to one-fourth of the total;
football
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 decreased its
popularity
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 by as much as 8%, which was a 10% decrease from that in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words popularity, basketball, football, sport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuates" was used 2 times.
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