The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
The given line chart compares data about the number of old people who lived in the USA who spent their spare time on 5 different items from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, although
, all of categories
except hiking Add an article
the categories
to
have wave trends, all of them increased.
Fix the infinitive
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According to
the plot, in 1980 most of the fact that elderly inhabitants who lived in the United Stated
preferred spending time watching TV; Correct your spelling
States
then
this
figure reached a peak in the 2000s at 70%; however
, decreased to 65% in 2010. Theatre, which is the second one
, started at 50% after that touched the minimum at 30% in the 1990s, yet this
motivation climbed slightly to 45%. Reading, the third one
, rapidly fluctuated because at the beginning it was 30%; then
in 2000, it reached the lowest point at 20%; nevertheless
, this
line went up enormously to 60%.
The diagram demonstrates the fourth one
was hiking that
had a drastic increase from 20% to 80%, ranking first in Correct pronoun usage
which
2010s
. Change the article
the 2010s
Also
, the last
one
was surfing the Internet which grew significant
direction at the start was 5%, Change the word
significantly
whereas
, finally
, the proportion hit 50%.Submitted by xeyojnn on
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