The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009
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The pie diagram gives information about the changes in the percentage of various forms of transport which the citizens of Europe used for travelling to their offices, between 1959 and 2009.
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, we observe that, in 2009, not only average distances but
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the time taken to arrive at an office had increased drastically, in comparison to 1959.
Moreover
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, in 1959, most of the people preferred to walk to reach their workplace.
However
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, in 2009, the majority of the employees travelled by car or train.
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to
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, during both years almost a similar proportion of the public used buses to reach their office. On closer examination, it's seen that, in 2009, the mean distance and time had grown by 13.5km and 25 minutes respectively, when compared to 1959. Despite
this
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, in 1959, more than half of the employees would walk to their offices. But
this
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figure was close to 25%, in 2009.
Apart from
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this
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, exactly 50% of workers used either a car or a train for travelling, in 2009, during the same period approximately 14% of them used buses. A similar number was witnessed, in 1959.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • private transport
  • public transport
  • car ownership
  • cycling
  • pedestrian
  • commuter trends
  • urban infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental sustainability
  • public policy
  • evolution
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • decade
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • reliability
  • urban planning
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