The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how many gym memberships in the 30-year period,from 1980 to 2010, which are categorised as men and women groups.
Overall
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,being fitness members for males fluctuated over the whole period,reaching the peak 2 times in 1985 and 2005, still standing at the higher compared to the peak of women's record.
Moreover
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,it displays a downward trend
at the end
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of the timeframe.
Conversely
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, the number of women memberships describes an upward shift,never higher than 3,000. In the beginning, the men's fitness enrollment outnumbered the female's amount,
then
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doubled to 4,000 in the following five years. In spite of a sudden fall by 2010,the figures for men reached a trough in 1995 and sharply rose to a new peak in 2005,accounting for 5000. Regarding gym participation for females, the number of members depicts a gradual fluctuation throughout the three decades, even though in the final it dropped to just under 2,000.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • pronounced difference
  • converge
  • diverge
  • membership rate
  • significant growth
  • slump
  • dominant trend
  • predominantly
  • consistent pattern
  • noteworthy
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