The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.
The table illustrates the expenditure of customers from various nations on daily necessities in the year 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
food
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drinks
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tobacco
were allocated the highest proportions of spending, Use synonyms
while
expenses for Linking Words
leisure
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education
were the lowest in all five countries that year.
Residents in Ireland mostly spent their money on Use synonyms
food
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drinks
, and Use synonyms
tobacco
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with
over 28%, Change preposition
apply
while
expenditure on clothing and footwear and Linking Words
leisure
and Use synonyms
education
had figures of 6.43% and 2.21% respectively. As for Italy and Spain, both had consumer spending on Use synonyms
food
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drinks
and Use synonyms
tobacco
at just under a fifth. Regarding the two other categories, Italy and Spain had similar figures, with 6-9% for clothing and footwear, and 1-3% dedicated to Use synonyms
leisure
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education
.
Turning to Sweden, less than a fifth of their expenses were for Use synonyms
food
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drinks
, and Use synonyms
tobacco
, the lowest among the five countries. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Turkey had the highest expenditure in Linking Words
this
category relative to the others. Linking Words
Finally
, with regard to Linking Words
leisure
and Use synonyms
education
, Turkey Use synonyms
also
spent more than the rest, which is over 4%.Linking Words
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