The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the
sales
of Use synonyms
tea
and pineapples in the countries namely, Austria, France, Netherlands, Norway, and Germany for the years 2010 and 2015. The income was measured in terms of Euros.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
,
the economy of Remove the comma
apply
Correct article usage
the pineapples
pineapples
trade was very high when compared to Change the noun form
pineapple
tea
Use synonyms
sales
. Use synonyms
However
, their Linking Words
business
was reduced in Norway and Germany Use synonyms
whereas
the beverage Linking Words
sales
Use synonyms
were
increased in all the countries Unnecessary verb
apply
inspite
of Correct your spelling
in spite
its
low profits over the period.
In the year 2010, Austria was the Correct pronoun usage
their
highly
Rephrase
most
profited
country among all in both Replace the word
profitable
sales
. Use synonyms
However
, its income Linking Words
on
Change preposition
from
Correct article usage
the fruits
fruits
Change the noun form
fruit
business
which is 16 Use synonyms
millions
, was four times that Change to singular
million
in
Change preposition
of
Use synonyms
tea
trade. Correct article usage
the tea
Moreover
, the incomes of both Linking Words
the
trades were similar in the rest of the listed countries.
With regards to the year 2015, Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
tea
Use synonyms
sales
were augmented in all the nations. Use synonyms
In contrast
, pineapple Linking Words
sales
Use synonyms
were
dropped Unnecessary verb
apply
down
in Norway and Germany. The beverage Change preposition
apply
business
Use synonyms
was
doubled in Austria Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
the fruit market Linking Words
was
tripled. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, France was reported with a Linking Words
tremondous
hike in Correct your spelling
tremendous
the
Correct article usage
apply
tea
Use synonyms
beverages sale
to about eight times Fix the agreement mistake
beverage sales
whereas
the pineapple Linking Words
business
Use synonyms
was
increased by about three times.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, tea, business with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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