The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

These two pie charts illustrate the nutritional consistency of medium baked

potato

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and

macaroni

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with five categories for nutrients :

Carbohydrates

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, Protein, Glucose, Saturated fat and other nutrients.

Overall

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, the portion of

carbohydrates

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is the largest one in both foods. But medium baked

potato

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has a protein

as

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second-highest one with 25% and

otherwise

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macaroni

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has saturated fat as

second-largest

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the second-largest

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one with 21%. And the

percent

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per cent

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of glucose of baked

potato

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and

macaroni

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is similar. The gap between

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them is only 4%. The nutritional consistency

for

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of

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baked

potato

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is well balanced.

Carbohydrates

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, the top nutrient in baked

potato

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accounts

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account

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for 35% and when we sort the

percentage

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percentages

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in order, the gap between nutrients

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is

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less than 10%.

However

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,

carbohydrates

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for

macaroni

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accounts for over 50%. And a

percent

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of saturated fat which has the second-highest portion of

macaroni

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is 21%, so the gap between

carbohydrates

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and fat is over 30%, which is quite big. It means

macaroni

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is too

centered

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centred

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on

carbohydrates

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.