You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
These two pie charts illustrate the nutritional consistency of medium baked
potato
and macaroni
with five categories for nutrients : Carbohydrates
, Protein, Glucose, Saturated fat and other nutrients.
Overall
, the portion of carbohydrates
is the largest one in both foods. But medium baked potato
has a protein as
second-highest one with 25% and Change preposition
apply
otherwise
macaroni
has saturated fat as second-largest
one with 21%. And the Correct article usage
the second-largest
percent
of glucose of baked Change the spelling
per cent
potato
and macaroni
is similar. The gap between of
them is only 4%.
The nutritional consistency Change preposition
apply
for
baked Change preposition
of
potato
is well balanced. Carbohydrates
, the top nutrient in baked potato
accounts
for 35% and when we sort the Correct subject-verb agreement
account
percentage
in order, the gap between nutrients Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
are all
less than 10%. Verb problem
is
However
, carbohydrates
for macaroni
accounts for over 50%. And a percent
of saturated fat which has the second-highest portion of Replace the word
percentage
macaroni
is 21%, so the gap between carbohydrates
and fat is over 30%, which is quite big. It means macaroni
is too centered
on Change the spelling
centred
carbohydrates
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, carbohydrates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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