Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while others think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.
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Provide a clear thesis statement in your introduction which outlines what your main points will be. This makes your essay easier to follow and shows examiners that you have planned your response.
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Make sure to fully develop each main point with specific examples or detailed explanations. Avoid stating ideas without properly supporting them with evidence or examples.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay into clear paragraphs, each with a single main idea. This will help with logical structure and make your argument more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that you have both an introduction and a conclusion. The introduction should set the stage for the discussion and the conclusion should summarize your main points and restate your opinion.
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Be mindful of grammar and spelling errors. Proofread your work to avoid mistakes such as missing articles, incorrect verb forms, and spelling issues.
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You have identified both sides of the argument, which shows a balanced understanding of the topic.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Opinions are divided as to whether usage of fresh water should be limited or not. This essay will closely examine both views and explain why I believe governmental intervention has more favorable effects.
It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects.
In modern days, we are presented with abundant choices of medicines and health measures, which can potentially shift a conventional doctor visit. In this essay, I will discuss how this is not a positive change, which is followed by the reasons behind this statement.
In the ancient days, people used to live in the Gurukulls in India and wear traditional uniforms, where they learned discipline and equality in their classrooms. While many institutions are very strict about their uniform code, others are lenient and have no dress symbol. However, regimentals bring equality and reduce bullying, but we cannot deny without uniforms some pupils feel better and motivated. Both sides of this essay will be discussed carefully before constructing an inference.
In recent years, the market has been flooded with domestic appliances such as air purifiers and water purifiers. These products are mainly used to lessen the effects of water and air pollution. the reasons for this development are the unavailability of Clean water and the effect of factories on a city. Both factors reflect a lack of consideration of human rights.