The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following bar chart shows the
number
of people visiting the global museums throughout the world in the span of 35
years
.
Overall
, it is apparent that the Vatican Museums experienced an upward trend in the
number
of people, but the London Science
Museum
saw a significant decline in the visitor count over the
years
. In 1980, the
number
of
visitors
to the Louvre
Museum
had around 8
million
visitors
, after which point there was a sharp increase in
visitors
in the following
years
, totalling the
visitors
to around 9
million
.
Similarly
, The Vatican Museums started with approximately 4.5
million
but the
number
of
visitors
further
increased in the following 7
years
to almost 9
million
,
this
made it the second most visited
museum
in comparison.
However
, the Shenzhen and London Science
Museum
both had around 4
million
visitors
at the beginning, though Shenzhen had the slight edge and after falling considerably to 3.5
million
in 2000, the
number
rose to around 4
million
again, and London
Museum
, unfortunately, saw a drastic decrease in
visitors
to 2.5
million
in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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