The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following bar chart shows the
number
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of people visiting the global museums throughout the world in the span of 35
years
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.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the Vatican Museums experienced an upward trend in the
number
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of people, but the London Science
Museum
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saw a significant decline in the visitor count over the
years
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. In 1980, the
number
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of
visitors
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to the Louvre
Museum
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had around 8
million
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visitors
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, after which point there was a sharp increase in
visitors
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in the following
years
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, totalling the
visitors
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to around 9
million
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.
Similarly
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, The Vatican Museums started with approximately 4.5
million
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but the
number
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of
visitors
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further
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increased in the following 7
years
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to almost 9
million
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,
this
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made it the second most visited
museum
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in comparison.
However
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, the Shenzhen and London Science
Museum
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both had around 4
million
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visitors
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at the beginning, though Shenzhen had the slight edge and after falling considerably to 3.5
million
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in 2000, the
number
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rose to around 4
million
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again, and London
Museum
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, unfortunately, saw a drastic decrease in
visitors
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to 2.5
million
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in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, museum, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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