The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first line graph presents the percentages of
households
in one particular country that owned three types of electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019,
while
the second graph illustrates the
time
spent on
housework
in the average household during the same period.
Overall
, ownership of these appliances increased during
this
period, with refrigerators showing the fastest increase by 1980. At the same
time
, the amount of
time
spent on
housework
decreased continuously from 1920 to 2019. In 1920, washing
machine
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were the most common of the three appliances, with ownership reaching 40% of
households
.
This
number
then
had risen to over 70% by 2019, despite a small dip in 1980.
By contrast
, nearly a third of
households
owned vacuum cleaners in 1920. Even though it experienced a gradual increase, it did not reach 100% until 2000. As for refrigerators, very few
households
owned one in 1920.
However
, ownership climbed rapidly, and by 1980, there was one in almost every household.
Households
spent 50 hours per week doing
housework
in 1920.
Afterward
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, the
time
continued to decrease significantly until 1980. After that, the
time
spent on
housework
saw only a small drop and reached slightly over 10 hours per week in 2019.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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