The bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart provides information
how
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on how
electricity
is manufactured and utilized in peak ten states in 2014.
As an overall
trend, China has major utilization and production of electricity
,while
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power
is the Republic of Korea .
In terms of energy construction, China is the top-ranked country with 5,398 billion
KWh
of energy production. US , Russia and Japan in 2014 produced 4099 , 1057 and 936.3 Fix capitalization
kWh
billion
kWh
of electricity
.The fifth-ranked country is India with 871 billion
KWh
production and Canada is sixth-ranked which manufactured 618.9 tons kWh
of power
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, France , Brazil and Germany produced 561.2 , 530.7 and 526.6 kWh
of power
respectively. Finally
, the Republic of Korea made 485.1 lots kWh
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electricity
.
Conversely
,China ,America and Russia consumed 5322 , 3866 and 1038 KWh
of power
. Japan is in 4th position with the use of 936.2 billion
kWh
power
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of power
Additionally
,India , Canada , France and Brazil used 698.8 , 499.9 , 462.9 and 455.8 billion
kWh
of electricity
. Finally
, Germany and Korea utilized 582.5 and 449.5 billion
kWh
of power
respectively in 2014.Submitted by mianraza686 on
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