The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The pie chart provides information about the primary types of transport for the staff and students who commuted to a particular university in 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, while
in 2004 people
were mostly transported by car, however
in 2009 humans were mostly transported by bus.
In terms of more people
were transported by car just over the
half, Correct article usage
apply
while
they had public transport made up just over a third. The smallest percentage shows by bicycle and train around 6%, in contrast
by walking comprised 3% in 2004.
By contrast
, the percentage of bus users rose by more than a third to 46% with the addition of a new bus stop in 2008. The lowest percentage is 4% used by the train. Some people
transported by bicycle and car made up around 22%, while
people
utilized walking at 6%.Submitted by mamashukuruvbobur31 on
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