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The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.

The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.
#show #information #willingness #insect #products #price #food #market #place
The following map and chart
represents
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represent
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the
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information about the global willingness to eat insect
products
 and the prices of various
food
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foods
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 available on the recent
market place
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marketplace
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, indicated in percentage and US
Dollar
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Dollars
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 per kilogram, respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that developed countries seem to have fewer
pecentages
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percentages
percentage
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in eating
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to eat
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 insects,
whereas
that
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of
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apply
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those developing countries noticeably have higher figures.
However
, it is
intertestingly
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interesting
interestingly
 to note that China and Africa
having
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have
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a reverse results
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reverse results
a reverse result
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unlike
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, unlike
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 the others.
Moreover
, it
can
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is obvious
to see
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that
the
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wildlife
products
 gain
larger
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a larger
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 sum per unit,
while
that
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apply
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of
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apply
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those basic meats and
products
 are cheaper.
To begin
 with, the research found that at 71%, Mexicans
has
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have
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 the highest percentage of willingness to eat insect
products
 among all other developing nations, followed by, Peruvians,
Thais
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and Thais
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, at 58% and 56%,respectively.
On the other hand
, the number of
peoples
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people
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agree
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who agree
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 to try insect
products
 from developed countries
such
 as the States, the United Kingdom, Spain, Russia,
Australia
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and Australia
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are
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is
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 less than 40%, except China and Japan, at 44% and 21% only. In regards to the food prices, basic meats and ingredients that
consumed
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are consumed
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 universally
such
 as red meats,
pultry
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poultry
 and
rices
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rice
kinds of rice
packets of rice
grains of rice
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 are
in
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at
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lower
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a lower
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price
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prices
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 than those wild
products
 of no more than 3.5
USD
/
kg
.
Beef
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The beef
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 was the only
products
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product
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 that reached its
peaked
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peak
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 among other
product
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products
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 in
this
 group at 3.03
USD
/
kg
,
whereas
 Thai Hom Mali rice
only
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was only
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 price
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at 0.78USD
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0.78USD
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0.78 USD
/
kg
.
Comparing
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Compared
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 with the wild
products
,
Weaver
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the Weaver
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 ant was the most expensive among all wild
products
 at 10.65
USD
/
kg
,
while
female
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the female
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 Giant water bug
only
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was only
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 worth
one fifth
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one-fifth
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 of the Weaver ants.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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