To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

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it is widely suggested that making

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to match the outgrowing rate of populations, others argue that it

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only unhealthy but

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nature negatively when it comes to harvesting. Both point of view and personal opinion towards

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consumption will be elaborated on in

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with, it may seem sensible for some to believe that

insects

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food

choices for

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to survive in nowadays as they have various benefits.

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because

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rich in

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this

respect, there is an

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shown that a spoonful of

insects

provided twice

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of protein than a thick slice of red meat.

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bread made from

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protein

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basic

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bread.

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, it

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less space for cultivating

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with the larger

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livestock

such

as cows, pigs, or poultries. To illustrate, a single herd of cows require

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at least

an acre for them to survive,

while

insects

require only a few square

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to survive. Many

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of

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that

insects

are not healthy as they

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not provide other nutrition but protein and there

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only a few reports that support

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its nutritions

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their nutrition

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.

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, if the

insects

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modification to be edible for

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nature

such

as

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rid of unwanted features that particular species had if the harvesting process done inappropriately.

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, I personally argue in favour of the benefits of its potential

food

choices seeing that creating

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of

food

sources will help us to not

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on specific

food

source

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. By providing

such

options, people in remote

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can meet their living

standard

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instead

of struggling to find common

food

source

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like pigs and

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. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that edible

insects

can pose some unwanted

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toward

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nature and may not be

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nutritious

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positive outcome

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detrimental effect and should be

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more in order to prevent the scarcity of world

food

resource

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.