Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?
Nowadays lack of available
water
is becoming serious
challenge which involves Correct article usage
a serious
all
individuals all over the world. In Correct determiner usage
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this
essay
I will discuss the possible Add a comma
essay,
reason
cause Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
water
scarcity
, and provide some effective methods for solving the problems.
There are many various reason
that may lead to Change to a plural noun
reasons
water
scarcity
. Firstly
, climate
change significantly affect
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affects
environment
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the environment
of
people live in, Change preposition
apply
such
as irregular
rainfall. Some areas suffer droughts because lack of rainfall. Without enough rain not only for daily use of Change preposition
through irregular
water
but also
farmers can not ensure corn harvest. Secondly
, as
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with
increasing
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the increasing
of
population, it is evident that Change preposition
apply
demand
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the demand
of
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for
water
rapidly increasing. Every day people consume huge amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
water
for comfortable
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a comfortable
life
, it
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which
also
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
shortage
of Add an article
a shortage
useable
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usable
water
. Finally
, modern life
rely
on industrialization which Change the verb form
relies
give
rise Change the verb form
gives
for
environmental Change preposition
to
pollution
, industrial activities contaminates
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contaminate
water
supplies.For example
, factories discharge numerous
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polluted
pollution
water
into river
or Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
ocean
which brings severe consequences.
Some methods would help ameliorate Fix the agreement mistake
oceans
water
scarcity
. one
of them is Capitalize word
One
government
could impose practical rules Add an article
the government
restrict
waste Wrong verb form
restricting
water
in industry companies. Since some companies not only use amount
of Add an article
the amount
an amount
water
but also
pollute the useable water
, they should take responsibility for reduce
waste and Change the verb form
reducing
pollution
of water
. In addition
, government
or social authorities also
can invest in water
conservation and education. Used water
can be purified by proper approach and be used again. Also
public should have correct
conception of saving Add an article
a correct
water
in their daily life
, such
as accumulate
shower Wrong verb form
accumulating
water
to flush the toilet. As for
avoid the damage of Change preposition
To
climate
change, not only government
but Add an article
the government
also
public
ought to Correct article usage
the public
have
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be
awareness
of protecting and restoring natural Replace the word
aware
ecosystem
, Fix the agreement mistake
ecosystems
such
as wetland forest
. In that way Fix the agreement mistake
forests
climate
will tend to stable
which is beneficial for people's Add a missing verb
be stable
life
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
lives
water
shortage, especially drinkable water
is more and more serious, climate
change, population
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the population
increasing
and industry Replace the word
increase
pollution
all are the
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apply
reason
for Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
water
scarcity
. However
, if government
could impose practical policy and public aware Add an article
the government
the
importance of saving Change preposition
of the
water
, the severe problem will
be solved to a certain extent.Wrong verb form
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You have addressed the task effectively by discussing various causes of water scarcity and suggesting multiple solutions.
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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