The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table demonstrates the migration rate of five European nations residing in each other’s countries in 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the Germans had the highest migration ratio
while
the Polishs had the lowest in 2011. Starting with Germany and England, these two countries had the highest
number
of individuals living in another nation, recording a large
number
of above 1 million. The majority of British
emigrants
live in Poland 550,000 people
while
the largest
number
of German
emigrants
resided
Wrong verb form
reside
show examples
in Italy 556,000 people. Turning to Italy and Spain, more Spanish citizens dwelled in other countries as compared with Italians.
such
that the Italy
emigrants
were almost times four of Spain's with a record of 196000 individuals and 861000 individuals respectively. In regards to Polish emigration, across all five nations, they recorded the lowest
number
of just 6000
emigrants
with its largest proportion being 4,400 residents in Spain.
Submitted by favourade234 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, emigrants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: