The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the
percentage
of students in an
university for various Change the article
a
aspects
in Change the article
the year
year
2000, 2005, and 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, print
Correct article usage
the print
resources's
Change noun form
resources
category
become
the most Change the verb form
becomes
Correct word choice
important aspects
aspects
with Fix the agreement mistake
aspect
highest
presentation. Change the article
the highest
Otherwise
, range
of modules offered got Correct article usage
the range
a
least ranking among other Change the article
the
aspects
.
Technical quality's
Change noun form
quality
aspect
experienced fluctuations from time to time. In 2000, the Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
percentage
was 65 and slightly increased to 63 per cent
. Then
, increased at
69 per Change preposition
to
cent
in 2010. Another
Change preposition
In another
category
, in 2000, print resources got 87 per cent
. And, increased by 2 per cent
. Unfortunately, in 2010 the percentage
was lower at 88 per cent
.
Category
of electronic resources was one and only Correct article usage
The category
aspects
that experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
aspect
significantly increased
. In 2000, the Replace the word
significant increase
percentage
was below 50 per cent
. In 2005, successfully jump
to 72 per Wrong verb form
jumped
cent
and rose up
again Change preposition
apply
until
88 per Change preposition
to
cent
. Move to
Verb problem
To
range
of modules offered's Correct article usage
the range
category
, from year to year, always decreased. Respectively, 32 per cent
, 30 per cent
, 27 per cent
. Last
Correct article usage
The last
category
, building/ teaching facilities was
Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
at 77 per Wrong verb form
remained
cent
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, aspects, category, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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