The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.
The chart demonstrates the variations in the expenditure habits of the citizens of
United
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the United
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Kingdom from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
,
it is clear that
people spent
majority
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the majority
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of their income on
the
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apply
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food
in 1971,
whereas
in 2001,
cars
grabbed their concentration.
However
, the
food
, furniture, and
the
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fuel were paid less over the period. In the year 1971, the majority of the people's income was catered to
food
which is about 44%.
In contrast
, the expenditure made on
cars
was half of that on
food
and double
to
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that of the spendings on petrol.
In addition
, the UK population purchased books(6%), computers(2%), furniture(9%), and about 7% of the amount was paid to
the
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restaurant services. By the year 2001, the situation was reversed in
case
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the case
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of
cars
and
food
purchases,
cars
were spent three times more than
the
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food
. The money spent on computers was augmented by about six times
whereas
in
case
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the case
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of the restaurant services it was doubled.
Moreover
, books were the least spent item by the end of the period with about 1%
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of spendings
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spendings
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spending
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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