The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of energy
consumption
in the USA in six different kinds of
fuel
, starting from 1980
along with
its prediction until 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of petrol and oil
consumption
were the highest compared to the remaining types of
fuel
throughout the given period,
while
the
number of
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consumption
of each
fuel
from 1980
were
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mostly tended to increase until the present day and
majority
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of them are predicted to keep rising until 2030.
According to
the data, the total
consumption
of petrol and oil
were
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at
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35
quadrillion
units
in 1980 and the
number
has increased until the current year at around 47
quadrillion
units
,
although
it experienced a slight decline in 1985 and 1995 to below 35
quadrillion
units
.
This
amount is predicted to rise until it reaches its peak in 2030 at approximately 49
quadrillion
units
.
Furthermore
, the
number
of coal and natural gas
consumption
depicted a similar pattern, which showed an upward trend, respectively from 20
quadrillion
units
and around 16
quadrillion
units
in 1980, to around 29
quadrillion
units
and 25
quadrillion
units
, consecutively.
However
, in 2030, the
number of
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consumption
of coal is predicted to rise up to 30
quadrillion
units
as
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its peak,
while
the
number
of natural gas
consumption
will remain unchanged.
Moreover
, the three least consumed energy, which are nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower, were consistently below 10
quadrillion
units
from 1980 until 2024, and are predicted to remain relatively stable until the next 6 years. The
number of
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consumption
of those kinds of
fuel
began at around 4
quadrillion
units
in 1980.
While
the
number
of nuclear and solar/wind
consumption
grew to more than 5
quadrillion
units
in 2024 and
are
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predicted to have a slight increase in 2030, the
number
of hydropower
consumption
has remained unchanged since the outset of the period. It is predicted to remain the same until 2030 as well.
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