The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of energy consumption
in the USA in six different kinds of fuel
, starting from 1980 along with
its prediction until 2030. Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of petrol and oil consumption
were the highest compared to the remaining types of fuel
throughout the given period, while
the number of
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apply
consumption
of each fuel
from 1980 were
mostly tended to increase until the present day and Unnecessary verb
apply
majority
of them are predicted to keep rising until 2030.
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the majority
According to
the data, the total consumption
of petrol and oil were
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was
at
35 Change preposition
apply
quadrillion
units
in 1980 and the number
has increased until the current year at around 47 quadrillion
units
, although
it experienced a slight decline in 1985 and 1995 to below 35 quadrillion
units
. This
amount is predicted to rise until it reaches its peak in 2030 at approximately 49 quadrillion
units
. Furthermore
, the number
of coal and natural gas consumption
depicted a similar pattern, which showed an upward trend, respectively from 20 quadrillion
units
and around 16 quadrillion
units
in 1980, to around 29 quadrillion
units
and 25 quadrillion
units
, consecutively. However
, in 2030, the number of
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apply
consumption
of coal is predicted to rise up to 30 quadrillion
units
as
its peak, Change preposition
at
while
the number
of natural gas consumption
will remain unchanged.
Moreover
, the three least consumed energy, which are nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower, were consistently below 10 quadrillion
units
from 1980 until 2024, and are predicted to remain relatively stable until the next 6 years. The number of
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apply
consumption
of those kinds of fuel
began at around 4 quadrillion
units
in 1980. While
the number
of nuclear and solar/wind consumption
grew to more than 5 quadrillion
units
in 2024 and are
predicted to have a slight increase in 2030, the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
number
of hydropower consumption
has remained unchanged since the outset of the period. It is predicted to remain the same until 2030 as well.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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