There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically.As a result,some people believe that non academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery ,should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work . to what extent do you agree or disagree.
In modern days ,there is too much influence to succeed academically,
therefore
, other individuals consider that non academic
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non-academic
modules
for example
physical education and cookery to be cancelled so that pupils can pay more attention to college.Nevertheless
, there are some benefits that extracurricular
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extracurriculars
comes
with Correct subject-verb agreement
come
such
as employment creation , increasing government GDP and improvenment
in Correct your spelling
improvement
improvements
terms
of health wise
.In my Add a hyphen
health-wise
opinion
l disagree with the removal of the subjects from Add a comma
opinion,
school
syllabus as their welfare is what we require in our daily lives.
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the school
On the other hand
, there are benefits as well that comes
with Correct subject-verb agreement
come
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an intellectuall
intellectuall
subject,Correct your spelling
intellectual
that is
position
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a position
on
work fields which requires less effort Change preposition
in
as well as
salary
increment.Thereby, students are to pay extra attention Correct article usage
a salary
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to
on
learning to obtain good grades Change preposition
to
therefore
, Add the comma(s)
, therefore
non
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non-academics
academics
modules
will be additional Change preposition
apply
on
educational requirements to achieve Change preposition
apply
such
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a post
post
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a post
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, for example,
for example
being a pilot,Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
requires one to be educated on Correct pronoun usage
apply
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an engineering
engineering
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an engineering
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programs
program
. To add on, there are more opportunities that are likely to come up with learnedly , Fix the agreement mistake
programs
for
example
GREAT BRITAIN has been recruiting nurses from Add the comma(s)
example,
africa
since 2018.
On one hand, in recent years ,unscholarly Change the capitalization
Africa
modules
has
proved that it is a Change the verb form
have
step
stone whereby one can attain their goals,moreso, it reduces Change the verb form
stepping
unemployment
rate in Correct article usage
the unemployment
the
societyCorrect article usage
apply
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,
to sum up
reduction
of other problems Add an article
the reduction
such
as theft and vandalism of state's
property.Change noun form
state
Furthermore
, these progress
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this progress
boost
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boosts
government's
economy in Correct article usage
the government's
terms
of tax payment
,Fix the agreement mistake
payments
nonetheless
, it helps in terms
of body fittness
and Correct your spelling
fitness
health wise
. We have examples of these people who became famous and rich through these Add a hyphen
health-wise
non
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non-academic
academics
subject
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subjects
such
Chioma Davido she
is a Correct pronoun usage
who
nigeria
chef , Christiano Ronaldo Correct your spelling
Nigerian
as well
as
Bill Rusell .
In conclusion,there is too impact in Correct word choice
and
terms
of succeeding academically that prompt
the idea of removing Correct subject-verb agreement
prompts
non
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non-academic
academics
modules
from school
syllabusCorrect article usage
the school
from
young people .Change preposition
for
However
,there are benefits that comes
with those programs Change the verb form
come
such
as employment of
jobs Change preposition
apply
as well as
increasing government GDP and enhancement in terms
of health wise
. In my Correct word choice
apply
opinion
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opinion,
i
would Change the capitalization
I
says
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say
non
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non-academics
academics
subjects should not be removed as their merits contributes
to our daily lives.Correct subject-verb agreement
contribute
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