The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the various means of transport
such
as buses, cars, bikes
, and foot used by the employees of an
European city in the years 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Change the article
a
Overall
, it is clear that
the walkers
Correct quantifier usage
number of walkers
were
diminished over the Unnecessary verb
apply
period
. In contrast
, the uasage
of cars was prioritised. Correct your spelling
usage
However
, walkers were more in number compared to the bike riders
In the initial period
, majority
of the Correct article usage
the majority
employes
, about 40%, preferred walking on foot to their working place. Correct your spelling
employees
However
, the pedestrians were reduced throughout the period
and finally
, they constitute about one-fourth of their initial population. In addition
, bikes
were the secondary choice in the early years. About 25% of the working staff used bikes
in 1960. Their usage was also
minimised over the period
and bike riders were just one-fifth of their previous number.
Moreover
, buses were used by the Canadian working force(18%) next to bikes
in the year 1960. Their utilisation was maximised in the next two dacades
. Correct your spelling
decades
In contrast
, their use was minimised and remained as the secondary choice for the year 2000. Furthermore
, car transportation was less preferred in 1960. However
, their usage was augmented
rapidly and equals the proportion of walkers for the year 1960.Wrong verb form
increased
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