You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of the
population
from 65 years old and above, from 1940 snd
2040 in three Correct your spelling
and
nationts
( the Correct your spelling
nations
USA
,Sweden, and Japan).
Overall
, the percentage of elderly people is increasing over entire
period, it is Add an article
the entire
producting
the highest proportion will be in Japan in the future.
The Correct your spelling
producing
population
aged 65 and over in the USA
at the beginning of the period it
started Correct pronoun usage
apply
around
10%, Change preposition
at around
then
it increased to 15% in 1980,
and remained at the same level, but it will be increasing to about 25%. Remove the comma
apply
While
in Sweden's population
aged began around
7% Change preposition
at around
then
it increased to nearly 15% , which is less than the USA
population
aged, however
, by 2020 it had been
Unnecessary verb
apply
raising
to 20% more Correct your spelling
rising
that
the Correct word choice
than
USA
,
and it will be growing to 25% in 2040.
Japan's Remove the comma
apply
population
aged 65 and over was the lowest percentage exactly 5% in 1940, then
it increased slightly to about 10% in 2020. It project
that it will increase to the Change the verb form
projects
highst
level over 25% in 2040 more than other countries.Correct your spelling
highest
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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