The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps
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the changes on an
island
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before and after it was constructed for tourism purposes.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the
island
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becomes more touristy where numerous resorts and amenities have been developed.
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, the development only focuses on the left
side
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of the
island
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where the right
side
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remains untouched. In terms of the
island
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prior to establishment, no man-made features were developed, with the site having approximately 300 meters in length and 100 meters in width. The
island
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was almost deserted with only several trees growing on the left and right
side
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and a beach is situated to the left part of the
island
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. Regarding the revamp on the
island
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, a pier has been built to allow yacht access directly to the
island
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. A vehicle track is provided to link the pier with a reception, which is the central feature of the
island
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.
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, going to the north using the track leads to a restaurant. In regard to the new accommodation, six and nine hotels have been set up on the left and right
side
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of the reception, respectively. In spite of the fact that each cottage is connected by footpath, only the
left
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side
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resorts have direct access to the beach which now has a swimming pool.
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