Some people think that the main purpose of school and university education should be to prepare people for work. Others, however, think that the true role of education is to make us better citizens. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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towards the true meaning of

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in divergence

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. Some people think that being a good person is the key

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having

education

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that it

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as a career preparation. Personally,

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strongly believe that the purpose of

education

is to

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our capabilities to be able to compete in

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market. I will outline two viewpoints in

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of

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my opinion.

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, all citizen

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act as an asset

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their country. In order for them to be productive and generate more income for the government, they need to be able to perform well

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their work.

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if the majority of the population

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educated.

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jump into an example, a student is being trained and

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in schools to

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some specific subjects prepared by the

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of

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. After completing all educational levels, school and university, they will look for a job opportunity. When they

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accepted into one and

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succesfull

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in it, they become a catalyst of innovation and

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profit. What if no

ones

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able

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to do

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and

education

is only focusing on building a better population? yes, it is indeed not good.

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,

education

is somewhat correlated with good

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. Those who are well-educated show a better attitude

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to those who are not. So it can be said that it is only a byproduct of

education

. A man with a high degree from

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university is currently being employed by a multinational company that

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a strong value on being a good man. Logically, the man will always improve himself in order to secure the job, not only as an employee but

also

as a citizen. In conclusion,

education

is supposed to be a seeding platform for

workforce

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the workforce

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and good

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will follow. Everyone needs to think about the meaning of

education

way beyond that.