The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares data about producers who were from different countries and had 4 various products in 2012 per metric ton.
Overall
, it is important that the
EU
manufactures products that have protein.
In addition
, The
USA
were the same as the UE, but not good at
milk
powder.
also
, the main thing that product was
milk
.
According to
the plot, the best manufacturer used by people was
milk
, and the
EU
was a massive generator by 142,970;
then
India and the
USA
had nearly 20,000 and 5200 less than the first one. a large number of Cheese, that had the second level, produced by the
EU
at 7120;
moreover
, the
USA
and Brazil respectively 4925 and 700. The graph shows the necessary butter, the third one for use, producer was India at 7500;
furthermore
, the
EU
and the
USA
had 2040 and 810.
finally
, people did not use
milk
power a lot because the best producer that was China had 1200;
thereafter
, New Zealand and the
EU
had roughly 100 and 400 less than China.
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