The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady.
The given bar chart depicts the transmute rates of crimes in
panama
city in three different Change the capitalization
Panama
situation
in the Change to a plural noun
situations
year
starting from 2010 to 2019.
overall
, we can see the grow
in burglary starting in 2010 after that it climbed slowly .Moving Replace the word
growth
to
car theft it kept Change preposition
apply
quit
the same between the Correct your spelling
quiet
year
2010 to the end of 2012 as well as
, started to be unastable
the Correct your spelling
unstable
folowing
Correct your spelling
following
year
.However
, robery
stayed the same throughout the years .
Correct your spelling
robbery
Robert
Moreover
, the highest rate in
burglary was in 2011 Change preposition
of
then
it started to decrease until it sudenly droped
.In Correct your spelling
suddenly dropped
adittion
car theft has stayed the same Correct your spelling
addition
the
past three years after that we can see Change preposition
for the
the
fall in 2013. Correct article usage
a
furthermore
, car theft climbed up again in 2017 .Finally
,robbery was
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apply
leveled
off Change the spelling
levelled
thoughout
the years until the Correct your spelling
throughout
year
2017 the rate of roberry
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robbery
berry
has
increased.Unnecessary verb
apply
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