The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The picture illustrates how
electricity
is produced in a hydroelectric power
The
station. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the power
station generates electricity
by taking in water
ne
located in the high-level Correct your spelling
line
reservoir
at
Change preposition
during
day
, flowing through the generator producing Correct article usage
the day
electricity
that is
distributed to the power
lines in the national grid, while
at night the water
from the low-level reservoir
moves up and the dam is closed.
Firstly
, the water
from the river streams into the high-level reservoir
before passing through the open dam into the power
station. Here, the turbine controls the generator which generates electricity
. Finally
, the electricity
exits from the generator through the power
line where it is then
distributed to the national grid.
On the other hand
, water
located at the low-level reservoir
is pushed upwards by the reversible turbine. As the water
travels upward,it passes through the dom which is closed to it prevent
intake from the river.Fix the infinitive
to prevent
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