The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the numbers of
men
and women
research students learning six science-related subjects
in the
UK university in 2009. Correct article usage
a
Overall
, men
have a more high
interest than Correct word choice
higher
women
in science-related subjects
except in one subject
.
Physics's major was taken around 220 by men
and only 48 by women
. Also
, this
major become
the most big gap among other Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
subjects
. Besides
, major
of astronomy was learned by 150 Correct article usage
the major
men
. On the other hand
, the women
only took this
subjects
approximately 52. Move
to other Wrong verb form
Moving
subjects
, men
who took geology as their major has
Wrong verb form
had
same
numbers Correct article usage
the same
with
astronomy.
In Change preposition
as
this
data, male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
have a similarity in biology's Fix the agreement mistake
females
subject
which is the total numbers were high. Respectively, men
and women
, 240 and 200. In other words
, only 40 students apart. The third subject
that men
most
take is medicine and Correct quantifier usage
apply
become
the second rank Wrong verb form
became
subjects
for Fix the agreement mistake
subject
women
who took
Wrong verb form
take
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
. Last
Correct article usage
The last
subject
, veterinary medicine as
Correct your spelling
is
one
and only Correct article usage
the one
subject
which
the number of Change preposition
in which
female
who studying Change to a plural noun
females
this
is higher than Correct pronoun usage
apply
men
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