the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs from the industrial area of Norbiton demonstrate the current and the planned future development of the
city
. The biggest work has been made
on the expansion of the road. Verb problem
done
Overall
, significant changes are represented in the city
, such
as new housing buildings and other facilities for people to make their lives more real, whereas
previously there was nothing other than industrial constructions.
The current river is located next to the farmland, although
in the planned construction of the bridge and an additional road on the territories of a farm. The recreation of the new buildings such
as the school, medical centre, shops and playgrounds are planned to be constructed. Whereas
currently placed factories, the future project decided to make a housing instead
in order to make the city
comfortable for people's lives and move the factory next to the farmland.
Additionally
, the expansion of the roads is seen as comprehensive, the cycle and in the future will make two new ways, one of which is leading to the other cycle with the three ways. This
makes the city
more busier but easier to access anything, as you can change your way comfortably.Submitted by krisjeffay on
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