The maps below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate the transformation of West Park Secondary School
since
1950 until 2010.
As we can see, the initial blueprint shows that a small building of Change preposition
from
academy
was surrounded by housing Correct article usage
the academy
and
open space farmland and Correct word choice
apply
playground
. Correct article usage
a playground
However
, after 30 years, many changes have been occured
which the houses have been removed and turned into car Wrong verb form
occurred
park
. Meanwhile, the school has been expanded Fix the agreement mistake
parks
due to
the rises
Fix the agreement mistake
rise
of
population. Change preposition
in
Not to mention
, the farmland has been modified into a sports field . Surprisingly, recent
development of the area in 2010 has Add an article
the recent
descrided
a major conversion on the parking lot which Correct your spelling
described
have
been tripled Correct subject-verb agreement
has
up
the size to fit Change preposition
apply
in
all the vehicles from the parents and the employed. As for the institution, nothing has been done but the sports field and the playground have been reduced in size.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, considering on
the Change preposition
apply
increase
number of people in Change the verb form
increasing
such
place
have upgraded many Fix the agreement mistake
places
infrastucture
in a good way to make a better standard Correct your spelling
infrastructure
living
Change preposition
of living
to
the communities.Change preposition
for
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