The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line chart represents a significant comparison of urbanization trends from three different countries between 2000 to 2025. In 2002, Russia had the highest number of urban

migrants

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, at around 18

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Iran and Indonesia stayed with only 10

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. In the next 10 years, Russia will reach 24

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additional

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and attain almost 90

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by the end of the projected year in 2025.

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, Iran

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will experience a gradual

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, making a number of 95

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by 2025 which makes it the country with the highest urbanization rates. The

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country, Indonesia, experienced 10

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migrants

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and continued to increase over the next 20 years, reaching 20

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, the

trend

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is going to persist until 2025 with the same amount of

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, which can be concluded that it has a different

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compared to the other countries. To sum it up, both Iran and Russia experienced exponential growth in their urbanization

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while

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Indonesia only showed a plateau condition.

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