The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the movement of
people
from rural to urban areas in three countries and their number predicted in the future.
From, the year 2000 until 2019, Russia had the highest number of people
moving with 15 million
in 2000, and gradually increased and is predicted to reach its peak at 85 million
in the year 2025. In comparison, Iran had the lowest number of people
moving in 2000 just below 10 million
people
. However
, after reaching 10 million
in 2005 they had been exponentially increasing in numbers, intersecting with Russia in the year 2020 with both having 80 million
people
moving and will eventually overtake Russia's first place in 2025 with a staggering 95 million
people
.
Indonesia was in second place in 2000 with 20 million
people
. Since then
, it has been a constant slope for 20 years, reaching the crux point of 30 million
in 2020. It is also
shown that in 2025 there will still be 30 million
people
moving from rural to urban areas in the country of Indonesia.
Overall
, Indonesia has the least amount of growth in contrast
to the country of Iran.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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