The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given diagram describes the consumers’ drinking and buying caffeine beverages pattern in five cities in Australia, in three categories:
coffee
shops visiting
, buying instant Verb problem
apply
coffee
and buying fresh coffee
in last
4 weeks. Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, most people prefer to go to a café for coffee
or tea, while
buying fresh coffee
is the least popular option. Moreover
, residents from Melbourne
account for the highest proportion in all three categories.
In terms of visiting a coffee
shop for a caffeinated drink, a majority of citizen
from Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
Melbourne
, Sydney and Hobart enjoy the activity, recording approximately 62%, followed by Brisbane with slightly above 55%. Lastly
, residents from Adelaide visited a café in last
4 weeks the least, with less than 50% recorded.
Moving to Correct article usage
the last
buying
instant Change the verb form
buy
coffee
, the figures for Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane were almost 60%, around 52% and exactly 50% respectively. Meanwhile, less than 50% of consumers from Melbourne
and Sydney purchased such
product
.
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products
Finally
, fresh coffee
was only bought by 40 to 45% of the population from Sydney and Melbourne
, while
that of Hobart was approximately 37%. In addition
, below 35% was the percentage of residents in Brisbane and Adelaide chose
to purchase fresh Correct pronoun usage
who chose
coffee
in last
4 weeks.Correct article usage
the last
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