The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graphic presents the worsening of air quality in the period of 400 years between the years 1600 and 2000 in the city of London. It measures pollutants in the air in micrograms per cubic

metrer

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meter

metre

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, It can be

obeserved

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observed

that both the sulphur dioxide and smoke pollutants have a similar curve throughout the timeline.

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Sulphur

dioxide is the most prominent toxic pollutant in the air and the smoke is

considerable

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less

prevelant

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prevalent

in the atmosphere. Looking at sulphur dioxide, its contamination in

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1500s stood at approximately 10 micrograms. Over the next 100

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its

level

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continued to increase, reaching the

level

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of 750. In 1750, its

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dropped slightly around 700,

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it again gained some momentum, roses

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steadily

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up to 800 in

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. from the

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beginning

1900s

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the 1900s

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, a considerable

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fluctuation

is recorded in

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level

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dopping

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dropping

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significantly from nearly 500 to almost 0 in

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the late

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1990s. Comparing the smoke, its

level

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steadly

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steadily

grew from

1600s

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the 1600s

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to 1850 from a mere 10 to almost 300. But with

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the begining

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begining

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beginning

2000s

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the 2000s

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, both levels of

pullutants

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pollutants

started to drop

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at an

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faster rate,

declied

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declined

to 0 in the end.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Complete response

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