The diagrams below shows the water supply system in Australia at the present and in future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagrams below shows the water supply system in Australia at the present and in future.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The two diagrams provide us with the
water
supply system in Australia now and in the future. There are three different kinds of
water
in
this
system including pure
water
,
storm
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stormwater
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water
, and
waste
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wastewater
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water
. In the present day, pure
water
flows from storage into human facilities
such
as households, shops, cities and factories. After that, pure
water
is used for daily life and becomes two types of
water
,
storm
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stormwater
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water
and
waste
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wastewater
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water
, The first one
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is releases
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releases
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released
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into the river, and the latter
moves
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move
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to the
water
treatment plant.
Finally
, the
waste
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wastewater
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water
, which is used for treatment, continuously
go
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goes
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to the river like
storm
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stormwater
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water
. In the future, there is going to
keep
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be
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the same process for pure
water
, flowing from the dam into facilities.
However
, the others will be changed.
Firstly
, not only
waste
water
is going to move to the
water
treatment plant but
storm
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stormwater
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water
will
also
be changed to release into the same destination.
Furthermore
, these types of
water
will not be allowed into the river. These waters will
be transform
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be transformed
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through the process and become pure
water
, giving back to the human.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.

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