The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates where the police
budget
for 2017 and 2018 came from and the pie chart depicts how it was distributed. The budget
came from total
Correct article usage
a total
three
sourcesChange preposition
of three
are
national government, local taxes, and other sources. And Unnecessary verb
apply
this
money was distributed in three categories : salaries, technology and buildings & transport.
Overall
, the police budget
from local taxes increased by more than 10 million pounds in 2018. In addition
, there is also
a small increase in national government and other sources categories. And the amount of money invested in the technology field roseby
6% in 2018.
The police Correct your spelling
rose by
budget
for 2018 increased by almost 14 million pounds compared to 2017. And as the portion of money on technology part got larger, in
contrast
the proportion of salaries for officers and staff decreased by 6%. Plus, the amount of Add the comma(s)
contrast,
budget
for buildings and transport was 17% which is the same in both years.Submitted by starmino0113 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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